To Josie, I enjoyed reading every slide about camp. Its cool how you listed everything in you day with bullet points. Your slides remind me of the summer holidays when I went to camp Raglan. It was so cool how it was not just the images that paint a idea in my brain its also the words. Great job. From Millie.
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Hi Josie I really like your blog. The bit I loved was how it hooked me in. It reminded me of camp Raglan in the summer
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To Josie, I enjoyed reading every slide about camp. Its cool how you listed everything in you day with bullet points. Your slides remind me of the summer holidays when I went to camp Raglan. It was so cool how it was not just the images that paint a idea in my brain its also the words. Great job. From Millie.
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